Eternal Doctrine part III

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Re: Eternal Doctrine part III

Post by palmpet » Thu Oct 06, 2016 3:34 am

Loving this as always but I have to say
It was kinda wierd not describing the first use of the quasi portal and first casual trip through quasi space...now that is normal for someone who's played the game like me of course.....but it might cause some confusion for my experimemt... I've been getting my father to read groombridge log and he isn't able to tell it's from a video game and understand it fine....now that's impressive and can be a great selling point for groombridge log....but little things like that kind of feel awkward in book form....I'm basically just saying it might be a bit alienating.....and wow this was a whole paragraph lol thank you for your time
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