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The End comments

Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 3:51 pm
by Lukipela
I was supposed to be doing something worthwhile but got caught up in this. A bit overly dramatic maybe, but getting caught by those guys can't be much fun.

Re: The End comments

Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2011 9:20 pm
by Death 999
Its mandibles. It's is for "It is".

Re: The End comments

Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2011 3:59 am
by BaVB
Wow, that was a depressing couple of minutes. Either way, it was good.

Re: The End comments

Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2011 8:46 am
by Lukipela
Death 999 wrote:Its mandibles. It's is for "It is".
Thanks, that's one of the things I always mess up :)
BaVB wrote:Wow, that was a depressing couple of minutes. Either way, it was good.
I was listening to something sad and feeling melodramatical.

Re: The End comments

Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2011 11:35 am
by Angelfish
Nice well thought out piece of fanfic. First I thought the intruders were ORZ, turns out they're Ilwrath.
Though having played UQM with voice acting on made me remember the horrible voice acting of the Ilwrath when it said "Greetings Hu-Man" :(

Re: The End comments

Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2011 3:42 pm
by Death 999
Sorry for dropping just grammar. It made me too depressed to say anything else.

Re: The End comments

Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2011 3:53 am
by Dyandod
Death 999 wrote:Sorry for dropping just grammar. It made me too depressed to say anything else.
Lukipela wrote:
BaVB wrote:Wow, that was a depressing couple of minutes. Either way, it was good.
I was listening to something sad and feeling melodramatical.
Melodramatic, not melodramatical. :)