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Post by Lukipela » Fri Jul 15, 2011 3:51 pm

I was supposed to be doing something worthwhile but got caught up in this. A bit overly dramatic maybe, but getting caught by those guys can't be much fun.

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Post by Death 999 » Mon Jul 18, 2011 9:20 pm

Its mandibles. It's is for "It is".

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Post by BaVB » Tue Jul 19, 2011 3:59 am

Wow, that was a depressing couple of minutes. Either way, it was good.
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Post by Lukipela » Tue Jul 19, 2011 8:46 am

Death 999 wrote:Its mandibles. It's is for "It is".
Thanks, that's one of the things I always mess up :)
BaVB wrote:Wow, that was a depressing couple of minutes. Either way, it was good.
I was listening to something sad and feeling melodramatical.

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Post by Angelfish » Tue Jul 19, 2011 11:35 am

Nice well thought out piece of fanfic. First I thought the intruders were ORZ, turns out they're Ilwrath.
Though having played UQM with voice acting on made me remember the horrible voice acting of the Ilwrath when it said "Greetings Hu-Man" :(

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Post by Death 999 » Tue Jul 19, 2011 3:42 pm

Sorry for dropping just grammar. It made me too depressed to say anything else.

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Post by Dyandod » Thu Jul 21, 2011 3:53 am

Death 999 wrote:Sorry for dropping just grammar. It made me too depressed to say anything else.
Lukipela wrote:
BaVB wrote:Wow, that was a depressing couple of minutes. Either way, it was good.
I was listening to something sad and feeling melodramatical.
Melodramatic, not melodramatical. :)
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