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Re: Peeru Fanfic Comments

Post by Gekko » Fri Dec 02, 2011 7:19 am

Humble request: Do you have entire story in one text file? I'm thinking of catching up when I leave for holidays, and I need some reading for the train. I can as well go copy and paste all your replies, but would be easier if you already have one big file.
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Re: Peeru Fanfic Comments

Post by Draxas » Fri Dec 02, 2011 3:52 pm

Death 999 wrote:That was not the intent. Where did it stop making sense? I can see the end makes the least, but it got gradually more and more obscure through the chapter.
Just after mention of the "Great Captains" poster. The whole corporate evaluation / cooking books line of thought lost me completely.

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Re: Peeru Fanfic Comments

Post by Death 999 » Sun Dec 04, 2011 3:56 am

I replaced it with something I think is better.

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Re: Peeru Fanfic Comments

Post by Draxas » Mon Dec 05, 2011 4:47 pm

That makes a lot more sense.

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Re: Peeru Fanfic Comments

Post by Dabir » Mon Dec 05, 2011 6:35 pm

Towards the end of the chapter, the famous Druuge captain seems to turn into a moon. I'm pretty sure all those mentions of Buusek should be Biitur.

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Re: Peeru Fanfic Comments

Post by Death 999 » Tue Dec 06, 2011 4:17 am

Dabir wrote:Towards the end of the chapter, the famous Druuge captain seems to turn into a moon. I'm pretty sure all those mentions of Buusek should be Biitur.
... ... yes, that is a problem. FIXING

Also, while I was there, I reduced the extent to which Peeru 'got it' without Muugko explaining it to her.

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Re: Peeru Fanfic Comments

Post by Zeracles » Sun Mar 11, 2012 4:12 am

He goes from being not much interested to enquiring about terms? I think Wugyup's playing it cool,
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Re: Peeru Fanfic Comments

Post by Death 999 » Sun Mar 11, 2012 7:13 am

Ha!

Keep in mind, the MDAP is a very inefficient mechanism of hooking up. The conception is artificial, and he could be called upon to father, say, Genlo's kids, or Muugko's.

Plus, as he said, he's in it for the money. You usually think of a MDAP as being for the kids, which is how he was approaching it to begin with.

As for his interest in Peeru... his plans are not short term (recall his 'not a bad person... for a shareholder' comment way back in chapter 13 or so - it still applies).

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Re: Peeru Fanfic Comments

Post by Draxas » Thu May 17, 2012 4:27 pm

I think that may have been one of the most interesting chapters so far. I really like the concept of the Druuge equivalent of a funeral being rolled into an estate auction.

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Re: Peeru Fanfic Comments

Post by Zeracles » Sun May 27, 2012 3:33 am

Maybe that should give me extra incentive to repay the money invested in my tertiary education . . .
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